The Kennedy Rebuttal

 
   
   

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The Forgotten Soldier: Authentic Fiction by a Real Guy
Edwin L. Kennedy, Jr.

 
   
 
 
     
 

In response to the article above, I wish to offer a few observations and then let the matter rest. First, I wish to compliment Nash on his tenacity in researching this issue. He has certainly come a long way from his earlier "extensive research in the CARL," the Combined Arms Library at the Command and General Staff College, Fort Leavenworth. By seeking primary source information this time, instead of relying solely on secondary-source library materials, I believe he has presented a more effective defense of "Guy Sajer" but not for the authenticity of The Forgotten Soldier. To state my view succinctly, I will quote Dr. Richard Swain (author of "Lucky War': Third Army in Desert Storm) on this matter "It is authentic bad history? But it's okay because Sajer, whoever, was a real guy!" (Excuse the pun.)


Regardless of how "autobiographical" are the experiences which the author relates, he did not create a true autobiography. "Sajer, wrote, as many soldiers before him have done, what in literary terms is known as a roman a clef  a novel based on real persons and events. In this regard, it is similar to Siegfried Sassoon's Memoirs of an Infantry Officer or Erich Maria Remarque's All Quiet On the Western Front. Although these deal with the First World War, both novels, like The Forgotten Soldier, are powerful evocations of their respective authors' experiences in the cauldron of combat. Both, especially Sassoon's Memoirs, place incidents and events experienced by their respective authors into a prose narrative which traces the wartime experiences of their central characters. Many of the events and experiences described are based on fact. The Battle of the Somme, for example, definitely occurred, and Siegfried Sassoon participated in it as a young British subaltern. As such, these novels are therefore, authentic. What the novels are not, however, are autobiographies, regardless of how authentic they may seem and despite their authors' participation in the historical events which provided them with inspiration for their narratives.

The roman ā clef is a powerful literary form, based upon actual events, which permits the author the literary license to, for example, create characters for dramatic effect, move events forward or backward in time, assign the experiences of several individuals to one central character, or disguise the identity of the novel's principal character by using an assumed name. All of these, in one degree or another, are found in The Forgotten Soldier.

I reiterate my point: The Forgotten Soldier is a great book and I have nothing personal against "Guy Sajer." I enjoy his book immensely and see value in it, but I don't use it for validating serious historical research. I believe that Nash has become so emotionally attached to this work that he is unable to objectively separate fact from fiction, to analyze the information and discern what is true and what is not. Nash's admiration for Sajer and The Forgotten Soldier has led him to rationalize its errors and discrepancies by the most imaginative methods possible. Nash implies the errors are minor, they are critical and undermine the credibility of the book.

Nash's correspondence with Grossdeutschland veteran Hans-Joachim Schafmeister-Berckholtz is a classic case of not seeing the forest for the trees. Interestingly Herr Schafmeister-Berckholtz has a phenomenal memory, according to Nash, who writes that Schafmeister-Berckholtz now recalls the famous "Sajer"---the same "Sajer" who uses the nom de plume "Guy Sajer" to protect his anonymity.  Schaftmeister-Berckholtz says to Nash, "At the mention of the name Sajer, my ears pricked up, because we did have a Sajer in the 5th Company, lst Grenadier Battalion." Wait a minute. Doesn't "Sajer" himself say that the name "Guy Sajer" was not his name but only a cover? I think attorneys consider this "coaching" the witness. In other words, Schafmeister-Berckholtz now remembers the famous "Sajer" as a member of his unit when he is prompted with the name.

Nash's current research is more scholarly than his original work, but some of the most important pieces, the analyses, are still flawed. I can only agree with a few of his points regarding the destruction of German records, the inability to remember some facts by veterans. and "Sajer's" wish to remain anonymous. However, it's the quantity of errors taken in toto and the lack of corroborating specific information that make the book suspicious. It is replete with errors of fact. I contend that it is still a great novel based on history. Only the most recent publisher has claimed it is an autobiography, the others knew better. Any good writer with access to open-source archival material on the Grossdeutschland could do what "Sajer" has done--- match many real dates, places, and units to known historical events. This has been done before. (Michael Shaara's The KillerAngels is my favorite example). I don't deny there is a possibility "Sajer" really served in the German Army, maybe even in the Grossdeutschland, but when does using incorrect facts pass for "autobiography," or more importantly, history?

Nash's interpretation of my articles seems to indicate that I think that everything in The Forgotten Soldier is wrong. Not so. The use of Le Breton's weak argumentum ad hominem adds nothing of substance to Nash's thesis in this regard. There are some things that are right. But enough blatant misrepresentations mid incorrect information occur to cause me serious concern for its use as a legitimate historical reference. Notwithstanding the publishers' editorial errors in my Army History and Military Review articles regarding this subject, I have never denied that The Forgotten Soldier is interesting and good reading dealing with the human dimension of war.

"Sajer's" refusal to answer my correspondence only makes my suspicions more acute. Somehow Nash has broken the code in corresponding with "Sajer." I was unsuccessful, not because I did not try, but I did not approach "Sajer", in the same corroborative manner as did Nash. I simply wanted honest answers to questions that might prove the veracity of The Forgotten Soldier, none of which would have violated "Sajer's" privacy or revealed his true identity. I never received a reply to any of the requests through the different publishers. This sent me a fairly negative and unequivocal message.

Nash's efforts in researching "Sajer' are commendable. He has certainly gone to great efforts to achieve his goal. I would caution him, however, not to let his significant emotional involvement cloud his reason as a professional soldier. I sincerely hope that, Sajer, is a real German Army veteran because I like the story he tells. I wish that there weren't so many errors in the book that make it implausible as a historical  "autobiography." I will not, however, throw out my first edition, hardback version of the book because of its faults. My challenge on The Forgotten Soldier is aimed at professional soldiers. They should question supposed "autobiographies" (or "histories") with honest skepticism and curiosity until they are proven authentic. The problem with The Forgotten Soldier is that we cannot be certain if it is not fiction. The Forgotten Soldier is great literature and has been recognized as such, but it is neither an official history of the Grossdeutschland Division nor an autobiography of "Guy Sajer."

Nash's arguments am getting better, but they are still flawed. My friend, the author and former Grossdeutschland officer. Helmuth Später, has not abandoned his position, despite what Nash implies. Therefore, long live Grossdeutschland veteran Guy Sajer, and his outstanding novel, The Forgotten Soldier!

 
   
 
   
   
     
 

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